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Hello, my name is Rita Chen. I graduated from college. As the hobby for me, I have been studying English in my leisure time. The English-print magazine I like most is The Economist. I also appreciate the studio of English classroom. This two contribute me so much. The reason I choose the teacher as my occupation is because I like the children and I like the English language. I have one-year experience of English teaching. And I have the TOIEC scored 655. I am ready. Please give me the opportunity. Thanks. 敗偷 幫我看看哪裡寫錯了 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.168.35.149 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/MenTalk/M.1470070796.A.CC0.html ※ 編輯: diverse101 (1.168.35.149), 08/02/2016 01:00:54
COLONELLIU: This is a book. 08/02 01:01
COLONELLIU: My English is very good. 08/02 01:01
BerITh: 真的要看英文能力應該就直接跟妳交談了吧 08/02 01:02
BerITh: 妳表現想要這個工作的強烈動機比較重要 08/02 01:02
diverse101: 總之 幫我檢查一下 08/02 01:03
dsfcomtw: 履歷內容,一般、可用、不用改。 08/02 01:10
dsfcomtw: 但,如果妳很想要這個工作機會,需主動打電話去關心面 08/02 01:12
dsfcomtw: 試的時間。 08/02 01:12
gruenherz: 哇塞 精進學人耶 畢業學校打LSE就更強了 08/02 01:17
gruenherz: 記得講些處理小孩子的成功戰績 08/02 01:19
Harrywu119: 你要不要加個台大上去 08/02 01:19
diverse101: 謝謝唷 08/02 01:29
Harrywu119: 在寫一些怎麼跟小孩活動跟管理 08/02 01:31
我明天再加上去 ※ 編輯: diverse101 (1.168.35.149), 08/02/2016 01:49:14
ffreakk: 你的程度應該看不懂經濟學人,提了人家考你就GG了 08/02 01:57
gruenherz: 經進學人鋒面就很有梗了 08/02 02:01
gruenherz: 其實用探險活寶跟海綿寶寶交兒童英語應該不錯 08/02 02:03
pups003: 我推薦辛普森家庭 08/02 02:05
gruenherz: 天線寶寶 有英國腔才是上流鑰匙 08/02 02:10
tmcharvard: 第三句您要不要改成"My favorite English magazine is 08/02 02:48
tmcharvard: The Economist." 08/02 02:48
tmcharvard: 另外,用"why I chose teaching as a career 來做 08/02 02:53
tmcharvard: 第五句開頭,您覺得如何,我想這樣會不會比較簡潔 08/02 02:54
fire60second: 大略看過就中式英文這樣~ 08/02 02:55
tmcharvard: choose 08/02 02:55
LongRanger: 跟上一篇一樣I 少用一點 08/02 04:02
Noobungas: these two ?children前面加the是指定吧,你又沒去那邊 08/02 06:35
Noobungas: 分數那邊看起來怪怪的,最後好像能力不足在拜託對方 08/02 06:36
dogp: 說真的,這個比較像求職文,就是: 拜託,給我工作!那種感覺 08/02 11:19
dogp: 我會偏好寫自己的經歷讓人知道我準備好惹,而不是告訴別人 08/02 11:21
dogp: I'm ready 08/02 11:21
csco: 這是整篇中翻英的概念... 08/02 16:08