推 bm701: +1 同意 都講到關鍵修改重點 10/20 10:12
推 vaakaa: 感謝前輩.除了第二點我還在想具體該怎麼改之外,最後一點是 10/20 10:13
→ vaakaa: 試著講我在申請DAAD的計畫,若順利過去就有補助,這樣老師 10/20 10:15
→ vaakaa: 可能比較想收我吧 10/20 10:16
My two cents....
: Dear Professor Dr. Eibert:
: My name is vaakaa, currently a third-year Ph.D. candidate in Communication
: Engineering at the National Chiao Tung University, Taiwan. I am focusing on
: the research of leaky wave antennas and interested in applying for a position
: as a visiting researcher at the Institute for High-Frequency Engineering.
我會重新調整為
I am writing this letter to apply for.....I am currently...
刪除 "My name is vaakaa" 這是中文邏輯
: I have read some of your great articles published at the IEEE TAP and IEEE
: MTT which covers a wide range of topics, including numerical and theoretical
: electromagnetics, advanced RF measurement techniques, MIMO antenna and leaky
: wave antenna designs. I am also interested in the design of leaky wave
: antennas and one of my research results has been accepted in IEEE TAP in
: August 2015. It will be my honor if I can join your research team.
Topics方式的列點，我會改成一兩句完整句子去描述對方的研究，要那種一寫就中
對方研究的核心的感覺，對方publish在哪裡不重要可以略去。
同樣的自己的研究也是建議用完整句子描述，這時候publish在哪裡才重要。
邏輯上，我會將自己的研究放前面，然後才連結自己研究與對方的研究的關聯。
策略上，我會建議是讓對方覺得可以從你身上學到東西，目前還看不到你的自信。
: I am applying for a grant that allows my stay for an academic year at a
: German university working on my research project. With the grant, the
: Ministry of Science and Technology, R.O.C. (MOST) and the Deutscher
: Akademischer Austausch Dienst (DAAD) will subsidize me to stay in Germany.
這一段我不太明白你要表達的意思以及與你應徵這個工作的關係？
: Attached is my curriculum vitae for your reference. Thank you very much for
: your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
: Sincerely Yours.
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: (註1:IEEE TAP和IEEE MTT是這位老師應該熟知的期刊縮寫)
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