Re: [分享] 托福寫作高分範文(送佛提供)

[Beattoefl (送佛計畫)]

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考生在考試當下是緊張的。往往有看題目，但抓錯了重點，寫錯了方向，造成不可挽回的錯
誤。
在此，拿這題來跟同學聊聊。

In times of economic crisis, local governments often reduce the money they
spend in some areas. In your opinion, if a local government is facing economic
problems, which of the following areas should it spend less money on?
(A) -Libraries
(B) -Public transportation
(C) -Police

大家在考試時選定了立場後，接下來就是先想兩個理由。
★★★記住，你選擇(A)的理由，就是你不選(B) (C) 的理由。
請看以下說明。

如果我選擇政府應該花較少的錢在Libraries上面，理由一是因為預算刪減在Libraries(A)
會影響的人數比較少。言下之意是說，預算刪減在 Public Transportation (B) or on
Police force (C) 將會影響到很多人。這就是說，你選擇A的原因，就是你不選擇BC的原因
。

理由二是政府預算投資在Libraries(A)並不會讓人民對政府有信心。換言之，政府將預算花
在Public Transportation(B)使交通方便或者是花錢在Police Force(C)藉以維持治安，都
會為人民帶來福祉讓人民對政府有信心。

結論段:
因此，政府應該cut budget on Libraries(A)。

大家這樣聽懂了邏輯了嗎?

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: 請看下面這一題獨立寫作題目
: In times of economic crisis, local governments often reduce the money
: they spend in some areas.
: In your opinion, if a local government is facing economic  problems,
: which of the following areas should it spend less money on?
: A. Libraries
: B. Public transportation
: C. Police
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: In times of economic crisis, local governments should manage public
: expenditures more efficiently. Local government administrators must
: prioritize spending to get through the difficult times. In my opinion,
: local governments should spend less money on libraries if they are facing
: a recession with a limited budget.
: To begin with, in an economic downturn, a local government cutting public
: funding will only affect a few library users.  This is because, with the
: available advanced technologies of today, most physical libraries have been
: replaced by Internet search engines; library usage has declined in recent
: years. For example, my hometown of Taipei decided to reduce public library
: funding during the 2008 financial crisis. Faced with financial shortages,
: officials were determined to minimize the impact on citizens’ daily lives.
: Infact, with the advent of the Internet, Taipei had already been
: promoting digital library resources and encouraging people to learn how to
: perform effective online searching over the past decades. Until 2008,
: a majority of people were already used to taking advantage of online resources
:  instead of libraries. As a result, when Taipei decided to trim library funds,
: only a few users were affected. On the other hand, officials had to increase
: police force budgets to deal with the increasing crime rate caused
: by severe levels of unemployment during the financial crisis.
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