[英中] 想請大大們幫看一下翻譯的內容

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您好,想請各位看一下翻譯的內容會怪怪的嗎,感謝各位了~~~

「在我生命中有一度想成為一名機師,所以那時有蒐集一些資料，
為機師夢做準備。但在這過程中我反而對飛航管制員一職吸引,且
愈來愈喜歡。它最使我著迷的部分為幫助引導航機安全起飛降落，
駕駛人員和乘客安全抵達目的地，能讓自己覺得對社會付出點貢獻
，讓生命活得更有意義」


翻譯如下：

There was a point in my life that I wanted to be a pilot, so I
tried to get as much informations as I could to fulfill this
dream.  But in the process, I found myself fall in love with
this job -- air traffic controllor, What I love the most about
ATC is that I can help people, make sure they get to the
destinations safe and sound, and in a way Ｉ contribute a
part of me to this society.


抱歉,覺得翻的有點怪
請教各位了~~

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