[創作] Regularity

[korn31910 (羅拔)]

It comes always on time,
the pain.

I want a comma not a full stop.
Is it too much?

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※ 編輯: korn31910 (101.9.226.134), 03/14/2019 07:43:00
推 spacedunce5: i didn't know you had women problems!
→ spacedunce5: ↑sexist joke
→ korn31910: XD