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※ 引述《gvc39 (我要啦~~~~)》之銘言: : 內容是描述 好朋友去世 在世者懷念故友... : 說他的心情就像清晨的鳥 沒什麼精神?? : 裡面好像一直重複 Those days are no more....??? : 唉呀....有人知道我再說什麼嗎? 詩中有鳥跟死亡的詩我只想到下面這首 Go Gentle Linda Pastan (1932- ) You have grown wings of pain, and flap around the bed like a wounded gull calling for water, calling for tea, for grapes whose skins you cannot penetrate. Remember when you taught me how to swim? Let go, you said, the lake will hold you up. I long to say, Father, let go and death will hold you up. Outside the fall goes on without us. How easily the leaves give in, I hear them on the last breath of wind, passing this disappearing place. 不過是寫給病危的父親的 而且沒有你說的那句Orz 僅供參考囉 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.119.199.139